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Post by putera on Oct 6, 2005 20:18:24 GMT -5
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Tanka ada lah suatu cabang seni sastera dari Jepun:
cara nya: terdiri dari 5 baris dengan sukukata sebagaimana di bawa:
5
7
5
7
7
contohnya:
sinar Ramadan:
sinar Ramadan
Bertafakur sejenak
Terdengar azan
Berterawih di surau
Buang rindu semusim
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Post by putera on Oct 6, 2005 22:29:42 GMT -5
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Perintah ad-deen
Tuntutan tak tertunai
Mizan berganjak
Timbangan tak keruan
Hanyalah pada nama
Nukilan: Nur ( e sastera )
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Post by putera on Oct 6, 2005 22:31:02 GMT -5
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Senja Ramadan
camar riuh di dahan
tiada henti
selangkah demi langkah
menuju ketaqwaan
nukilan: dipinggiran ( e sastera )
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Post by putera on Oct 6, 2005 22:32:31 GMT -5
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Fotomorgana
persimpangan berdebu
berserah diri
ampunan MU ku harap
mendambakan cinta MU
nukilan: dipinggiran ( e sastera )
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Post by putera on Oct 6, 2005 22:34:39 GMT -5
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Buka puasa
Lunas lapar dahaga
Erat terikat
Terpancar kebahgiaan
Rapat silaturrahim
nukilan: TabirAlam ( e sastera )
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Post by Puteri Bayu on Oct 8, 2005 18:53:17 GMT -5
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Alam semesta
tanpa bulan menerang
hitam gelap gulita
hujankan pasti
guruh petir terpancar
resah gelisah hati
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Post by putera on Oct 9, 2005 7:31:37 GMT -5
salam .. ain .. heheheheh awas .. 5 baris aja 5 7 5 7 7 okay .... selamat mencuba  |
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Post by Puteri Bayu on Oct 13, 2005 20:22:50 GMT -5
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ok ..ain ubah
Alam semesta
tanpa bulan menerang
hujankan pasti
hitam gelap gulita
guruh petir terpacar
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Post by Puteri Bayu on Oct 13, 2005 20:24:59 GMT -5
[shadow=maroon,left,300] sekali mencuba... bulan puasa malam lailatul gadar seribu bulan pahala lipat ganda buat amalan [/shadow] |
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Post by Diehard2 on Oct 14, 2005 1:43:23 GMT -5
aik dah kira lulus tu syabas ain |
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Post by Puteri Bayu on Oct 19, 2005 16:33:51 GMT -5
[shadow=green,left,300] putera , agak ain dapat berapa markah...  so jgn lupa bagi duit raya cozs dah lulus.. pohon merimbun bayu melambai-lambai sepoi bahasa bisikan lagu syahdu jiwa terasa tenang [/shadow] |
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Post by Diehard2 on Oct 24, 2005 10:32:32 GMT -5
ain ..... kira kira 95 % ...cukup ? menjelang syawal berakhir nya puasa hati gembira meski berada jauh di kota perantauan |
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Post by Puteri Bayu on Oct 27, 2005 16:25:21 GMT -5
[shadow=black,left,300] 95 %....kira dapat A kan bisikan dihati semaian kasih sayang terukir cinta bahagia tercipta hati bersatu ria [/shadow] |
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Post by Jasmine on Oct 28, 2005 4:32:59 GMT -5
cinta abadi
bertakhta di hati
kau yang satu
kau milikku
kekal abadi
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Post by putera on Oct 30, 2005 9:54:37 GMT -5
Jasmine ...
baris keempat .... 7 sukukata
baris kelima ...... 7 sukukata
cuba lagi kay
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so jgn lupa bagi duit raya cozs dah lulus..