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Post by putera on Oct 6, 2005 22:41:19 GMT -5
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Bulan Ramadan
menghimpunkan amalan
timbang ibadah
nukilan: dipinggiran ( e sastera )
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Post by putera on Oct 6, 2005 22:42:58 GMT -5
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Hiba mendada
Musim Ramadan lalu
Jejak mu hilang
nukilan: indera
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Post by Puteri Bayu on Oct 13, 2005 20:27:48 GMT -5
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teratak kasih..
tersergam indah
saujana memandangnya
damai dihati
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maaf...
maaf dipohon
susun jari sepuluh
dibulan syawal
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Post by Diehard2 on Oct 14, 2005 1:40:15 GMT -5
wow ... cepat nya dia mengejar alkisah haiku .. syabas ain  |
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Post by Puteri Bayu on Oct 15, 2005 19:54:48 GMT -5
[shadow=green,left,300] putera ..terima kasih kerana pujian bolehlah bagi duit rayakan  satu ikatan ikatan terlerai musnah impian luruh dihati  [/shadow] |
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Post by putera on Oct 16, 2005 10:21:51 GMT -5
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ain ...duit raya
pakai credit card boleh kan ? ;D
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Post by Puteri Bayu on Oct 27, 2005 16:16:47 GMT -5
[shadow=blue,left,300] putera ..duit raya masuk kat akauan aja bolehkan... lama menghilang muncul tak disangka resah dihati [/shadow] |
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Post by putera on Oct 30, 2005 9:57:10 GMT -5
okay no hal .. dimasukkan bersama gaji dan bonus dah terima belom ?  |
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Post by Puteri Bayu on Nov 1, 2005 16:44:49 GMT -5
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gaji dan bonus
simpan dibank saja
menunai haji
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Post by putera on Dec 1, 2005 5:24:59 GMT -5
amboi amboi puteri bayu sampai ke situ pulak rajin menyimpan pasti ada imbalan bonus dividen tu pun kalau di masukkan ke ASB |
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Post by Puteri Bayu on Dec 8, 2005 18:40:25 GMT -5
rajin menyimpan
selamat sentiasa
menjadi berkat
betul tak putera?
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Post by amifiq on Sept 9, 2006 23:08:00 GMT -5
lepas puasa
sambutlah hari raya
dapat duit raya
hehehehe.......
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Post by Puteri Bayu on Feb 23, 2008 3:13:37 GMT -5
a spring nap
downstream cherry trees
in bud
What is expressed, but not said, is the thought that buds on a tree can be compared to flowers taking a nap. One could also ask to what other images could cherry buds be compared? A long list of items can form in one's mind and be substituted for the first line. Or one can turn the idea around and ask what in the spring landscape can be compared to a nap without naming things that close their eyes to sleep. By changing either of these images one can come up with one's own haiku while getting a new appreciation and awareness of comparison.
The Technique of Contrast - Now the job feels easier. All one has to do is to contrast images.
long hard rain
hanging in the willows
tender new leaves
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